dude
needs more work into it. no offence but i did my first compo when i was 10 and its better. im reeeaaaally sure you are able to do better than this. also, dont just stick to one DAW. try another one. (i use reason now. i dont know why but i really like reason better than fl studio.) anyways, yeah im pretty sure you could and can do better in the near future...just assuming you are serious about this. probably not.